Lyrics ideas song

Every girl dreams of finding the right man in her life and settling down with him at some point and starting a family. She craves the goodness of life, her man's love and all his attention. Well, all those beautiful dreams and fantasies go down the drain when she finds out her date is nothing

I wrote this song, it’s supposed to be a rap song, and I wanted everyone’s opinion. If you want to read the rest there is a board called mine you can go to.