Your text provides a vivid and honest depiction of Marseille, capturing both its beauty and its challenges. Here's a revised version that maintains your original observations while enhancing clarity and flow:The gentle sounds of moving water, whether from the vast Mediterranean Sea or one of the city’s many fountains, birds chirping softly in the treetops, and the subtle hum of street noise—all create a unique atmosphere in Marseille. For the blind, this sensory experience must be entirely…
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