Talk:Ivan Palmaw/GA1

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Nominator: Generalissima (talk · contribs) 23:31, 29 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 11:34, 8 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hi, thanks for nominating this article. I'll have a look and review it. Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 11:34, 8 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

•   There is unlikely any copyright violation in the article. Earwig's Copyvio Detector has reported only 21.3% in similarity.
•   There are no cleanup banners, such as those listed at WP:QF, in the article.
•   The article is stable.
•   No previous GA reviews.

•   Prose, spelling, and grammar checking.
  • "emigrated to" → "immigrated to"
  • "office building" → "an office building"
  • Done. - G
  • I recommend cutting down on the number of "he"'s in the article, and instead replacing it with his surname.
  • Done. - G
•   Checking whether the article complies with MOS.
  • Optional: I recommend placing both images inside the {{Multiple image}} template.
  • The article is relatively short, so it's alright to leave the text inside one section.
  • The article complies with the MOS:LEDE, MOS:LAYOUT, and MOS:WTW guidelines. There is no fiction and embedded lists within the article, so I am skipping MOS:WAF and MOS:EMBED. Overall, the lede's length is okay, and it summarises the article, the article has appropriate sections, and there are no biased words in the article.
•   Checking refs, verifiability, and whether there is original research.
  • References section with a {{reflist}} template is present in the article.
  • No referencing issues.
  • All references are reliable.
    • Wikilink Jeffrey Karl Ochsner as author.
      • Done. -G
    • Ref 5 is missing pages.
      • Fixed. -G
  • Spotchecked Ref 1, 2, 4–all verify the cited content. AGF on Ochsner.
  • Copyvio already checked.
•   Checking whether the article is broad in its coverage.
  • When did he enroll? If unknown, rephrase the sentence → "He studied military engineering at the Saint Petersburg Imperial University".
    • Fixed. - G
  • Do we know anything about his post-1957 work at Harry Powell & Associates?
    • Sadly not. -G
  • The rest of the article addresses the main aspects, and it stays focused on the topic.
•   Checking whether the article is presented from an NPOV standpoint.
  • The article meets the criteria and is written in encyclopedic language.
•   Checking whether the article is stable.
  • As noted in the initial comments, the article has been stable.
•   Checking images.
  • Optional: Add a non-free image of Palmaw in the infobox.
    • Done. -G
  • Images are properly licensed.
  • Saint Spiridon Orthodox Cathedral caption → "Palmaw designed the Saint Spiridon Orthodox Cathedral in Seattle".
    • Fixed. - G

@Generalissima: The review will be put on hold for a week. Once the issues are fixed, I'll promote the article.   Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 09:39, 9 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Vacant0: Okay! I think I got to everything. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 18:39, 9 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Nice job. Promoting. Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 19:32, 9 September 2024 (UTC)Reply